Very nice choice for music. It gives off a very somber tone and helps pull at the heartstrings. Very emotional video.
Overall this is a great documentary, they could be some better edits to the interview tracks, sometimes they just cut off very quick and it was a bit jarring, but overall very nice.
Sorry I came in late! But from what I saw you guys did a really nice job and had a very good interview subject (the last one) who was very well spoken. Good B-Roll
Very good with the editing and inclusion of b-roll as well as placement of the storyline with the different speakers. Glad you included their names as well as a little bit of who they are below each person speaking. Music fit well with the documentary. Few minor issues I had was at the beginning where the b-roll of the kids playing a game looked to be a repeat. Other than that it was a good video for a good cause.
The camera position during the interviews was position very high to where we see a lot of empty space at the top of their heads. The sound at times was too high especially during the interviews. Other than that it was a great video... I learned a lot about MS that I didn't know before.
I thought this was a good doc. The music was very fitting to the subject matter. The cuts were smooth and the footage for the most part was nice. The story was put together well with the sound bites.
The sound was a little abrupt in some places- I feel like fading could have been helpful. Other than that, nice work, very good topic.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I liked the music choice. I thought the shot that panned completely around the room was a little much and made me kind of dizzy though.
ReplyDeleteI think the interviews were very effective when you had the event happening in the background
ReplyDeleteVery nice choice for music. It gives off a very somber tone and helps pull at the heartstrings. Very emotional video.
ReplyDeleteOverall this is a great documentary, they could be some better edits to the interview tracks, sometimes they just cut off very quick and it was a bit jarring, but overall very nice.
Sorry I came in late! But from what I saw you guys did a really nice job and had a very good interview subject (the last one) who was very well spoken. Good B-Roll
ReplyDeleteVery good with the editing and inclusion of b-roll as well as placement of the storyline with the different speakers. Glad you included their names as well as a little bit of who they are below each person speaking. Music fit well with the documentary. Few minor issues I had was at the beginning where the b-roll of the kids playing a game looked to be a repeat. Other than that it was a good video for a good cause.
ReplyDeleteThe camera position during the interviews was position very high to where we see a lot of empty space at the top of their heads. The sound at times was too high especially during the interviews. Other than that it was a great video... I learned a lot about MS that I didn't know before.
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DeleteI like how you kept the music throughout and I also liked how you interviewed both the workers as well as people who work there.
ReplyDeleteI like how you kept the music throughout and I also liked how you interviewed both the workers as well as people who work there.
ReplyDeletevery good use of somber music and great story telling.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a good doc. The music was very fitting to the subject matter. The cuts were smooth and the footage for the most part was nice. The story was put together well with the sound bites.
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